An Echo Within
Conversations Between Being and Awareness
Me walked alone through the park, the chill of Halloween night thick in the air. The trees creaked, casting long shadows, and distant laughter echoed through the fog. Suddenly, a figure in a dark hoodie appeared from the mist.
“Who are you?” Me asked, his voice laced with curiosity.
The figure tilted his head, eyes glinting in the dim light. Me thought, I am looking into a mirror.
“I am the I” the figure whispered, his voice strange and distant.
Me:
I’ve been looking for you.
Everyone points to my face, my name, my body.
But that’s not you, is it?
I:
No. That’s just the shirt I wear.
You’ve washed it, fed it, hurt it, healed it,
but it’s still cloth. I am the one who feels the cloth touch skin.
Me:
So you live inside? Behind the eyes? In the brain?
I:
If I lived inside, you could find me with a knife or a scan.
But cut deep, and you’ll only find flesh and fire, never me.
I am the watcher, not the watched.
Me:
Then where are you hiding?
When I close my eyes, it’s dark, I see nothing but thought.
I:
I am the space those thoughts rise in.
The silence before sound, the still mirror before the face leans in.
You mistake the ripples for the water itself.
Me:
Are you saying this body is not mine?
I:
It’s yours like a car is yours.
You steer it, polish it, curse it when it breaks.
But when you sleep, who drives? When you dream, where do you go?
Me:
Sometimes I dream I’m flying above my bed.
I see my body and feel no weight.
Is that you, I?
I:
That’s closer to me than your heartbeat.
In those moments, the walls fall.
You are not inside the body, the body floats inside your knowing.
Me:
So death… is it an ending or just parking the car?
I:
Neither. It’s changing roads.
The driver steps out, looks back, and smiles.
You don’t vanish when a screen goes dark, the light just stops passing through that glass.
Me:
Why can’t I feel you all the time?
I:
Because you chase noise.
Every thought shouts “me” louder than my whisper.
Sit still. Let the mind tire out.
Then I appear, not as a stranger,
but as the quiet you’ve always been.
Me:
If you’re the real one, then who am I?
I:
You’re my shadow trying to find its source.
You are the echo calling out to its own voice.
When you stop running, we become the same breath again.
Me:
I think I understand… a little.
You are not in me. I rise within your knowing.
Then are you the source of all I see?
I:
No. I am not the light, I just mirror it.
When the shadow turns to the light, remember:
I shine with the light, not the One who made it.
You were never lost, only turned the wrong way in a hall of mirrors.
And Me, having found its own answers, left this dialogue between Me, ‘the Self,’ and I, ‘the Silent Self-Awareness’ that observes it.
A Moving Van
Some dangers bite. Some don’t. And the ones that don’t…are the ones you need to watch the most.
The Ghost in the Glue Trap
I just wanted to save my cookies. Instead, I caught a ghost in a rat. Things got philosophical fast.
The Queue Circles the Earth
If you have stood in a line that did not move, this room will feel familiar. Power calls it safety, law calls it procedure.



“Every thought shouts “me” louder than my whisper”
Your words are echoing where I want my lack of thinking to lead once I stop listening to the shouts.
Loved this one, Tahir
This is beautifully profound. The dialogue between ‘Me’ and ‘I’ feels like a mirror reflecting the soul itself. Lines like ‘I am the space those thoughts rise in’ and ‘You are the echo calling out to its own voice’ capture the essence of self-awareness in such a poetic way. Quiet, timeless, and deeply awakening.