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Soham's avatar

I enjoyed reading this. 😊

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Urvasi Devi Dasi's avatar

This is a beautiful and quietly haunting piece. Both tender and eerie in equal measure. You balance humour and grief so delicately that it almost feels like a whispered confession between worlds.

What stands out most is how the “ghost in the rat” becomes a metaphor for loneliness and the aching need to be seen. The setup — a mundane domestic moment turned supernatural — feels like magical realism at its best: the extraordinary hiding inside the ordinary. The dialogue reads almost like a late-night therapy session between the living and the lost, where cookies replace communion bread, and forgiveness replaces exorcism. As usual, I love your writing Tahir.

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