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Tony Burkinshaw's avatar

“Every thought shouts “me” louder than my whisper”

Your words are echoing where I want my lack of thinking to lead once I stop listening to the shouts.

Loved this one, Tahir

Tahir's avatar

Thanks so much, Tony. Your words mean a lot.

Dawnithic's avatar

This is beautifully profound. The dialogue between ‘Me’ and ‘I’ feels like a mirror reflecting the soul itself. Lines like ‘I am the space those thoughts rise in’ and ‘You are the echo calling out to its own voice’ capture the essence of self-awareness in such a poetic way. Quiet, timeless, and deeply awakening.

Tahir's avatar

Thank you so much, Waseem. I’m really encouraged by your words.

venus faye's avatar

I absolutely love this! How creative!

Tahir's avatar

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!

AsukaHotaru's avatar

This was such a hauntingly beautiful dialogue — both philosophical and tender in its stillness. I love how you framed the exchange between Me and I; it felt quietly cosmic yet deeply human. The imagery of mirrors, silence, and shifting light stayed with me — like standing at the edge of awareness itself. Thank you for writing this; it reminds me that stillness isn’t emptiness, but presence finally heard~

Tahir's avatar

Thank you so much for your beautiful reflection, Asuka. I’m truly moved by how deeply you engaged with this. Your words are incredibly encouraging to me.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

It felt right to share that with you~

Tony Burkinshaw's avatar

This is the comment I wish I’d read before I wrote mine. You’ve captured what I was thinking so well.

‘Stillness isn’t emptiness, but presence finally heard..’

AsukaHotaru's avatar

To the stillness within us~ 🥂🥂

Tony Burkinshaw's avatar

Cheers 🥂🥂

Well said.

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

This is absolutely stunning.. The dialogue between Me and I reads like meditation itself, peeling back layer after layer until only awareness remains. That final line… “turned the wrong way in a hall of mirrors”, perfect. Quietly profound and beautifully written. I loved it.

Tahir's avatar

Thank you, Andrea. I’m deeply touched by your reflection. It’s rare and special when someone not only reads but truly feels the space between the lines. I’m grateful the dialogue reached you.

Hina Gondal's avatar

Love this

Tahir's avatar

Thank you so much, Hina! So happy you enjoyed it 😊

Aster solenne's avatar

Amazing, Tahir! Love it! I love you your concepts🙂‍↕️💖

Tahir's avatar

Thank you so much, Aster! Your support really means a lot.

Aster solenne's avatar

You're welcome! I love your work!💖^⁠_⁠^